[cin]

it's better than your v2, but personally i'd still keep v1.
the best tip i can give you is to not change your sig all the time
but to start over from scratch everytime you want to try things
out. this will make the sig look a lot better because you're not
trying to change stuff on a sig you've already completed. when
you have had some practice and know exactly what you want
to change and how to do that, then you can consider changing
things on an existing sig of yours.